docs: Self review of doc pages

docsite/docs/index.md

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 # Vantage documentation
 
-Vantage is a self-hosted, multi-tenant infrastructure control plane. It manages
-SSH keys, runs scripted workflows, watches services, stores secrets, opens
-browser consoles and applies OS updates across a fleet of servers.
+Vantage manages a fleet of servers from one place: SSH keys, scripted workflows,
+service monitoring, a secrets vault, browser consoles and OS updates. Run it
+yourself, or let us run it for you.
 
 A central server drives a lightweight agent installed on each managed machine.
 The agent connects **outbound only**, so managed servers need no inbound
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 | If you want to                          | Read                                                            |
 | --------------------------------------- | --------------------------------------------------------------- |
 | Understand what the pieces are          | [What is Vantage](./getting-started/what-is-vantage.md)         |
+| Decide who should run it                | [Cloud or self-hosted](./getting-started/cloud-vs-self-hosted.md) |
 | Run it on your own hardware             | [Self-hosted install](./getting-started/self-hosted-install.md) |
+| Licence a self-hosted install           | [Claim a Free licence](./getting-started/claim-free-licence.md) |
 | Enrol your first machine                | [Add your first server](./getting-started/first-server.md)      |
 | Manage your account, licence or billing | [Vantage HQ](./hq/accounts-and-signup.md)                       |
 | Look something up                       | [Reference](./reference/environment-variables.md)               |
 
 ## The two products
 
-**Vantage** is the control plane the thing you sign in to in order to manage
+**Vantage** is the control plane, the thing you sign in to in order to manage
 servers. It runs either on your own infrastructure or as a cloud instance we
 run for you.